Wednesday 27th August
Last Friday the Red Beach School Olympics returned with spectacular athletes all from different counties.
Most of the countries got medals. It was a big opening ceremony with every country with a flag or a banner. I was glad to be there
There were lots of different sports like: Soccer, basketball, badminton and much much more.
One day I might be an Olympian in London. “When I was in Barcelona, I knew it wasn’t about winning, it was about being there and participating” said Mr. Scheib.
Hi Emily!!!!
16 years ago
2 comments:
Really good, Skyler.I like they way you describe the different parts of your work.
Bad:I didn't really get what the opening ceremony was about
-Neil
My introduction paragraph includes all the essential points,
explaining who, what, when, where.
I think you sould of put in the first paragraph a bit more W questions.
Apart from that it was a great news paper report!!!
Yasmin
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