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Thursday, October 30, 2008

The Room. By Alesha (Story setting)

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My introduction paragraph includes all the essential points,
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The most important ideas at the start and the least important are at the end.

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I have a good headline to hook the audience.

I have written in the past tense.

I have checked my puctuation adn spelling

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I can write a suitable title that will engage readers.

I can hook my audience by starting at the moment.

I can sequence ideas and organise them into paragraphs.

I can use a variety of language features to enhance my witing and engage my audience.

I can use a thesaurus to add more interesting vocabulary.

I can use a dictionary to correct mis-spelt words.

I can use correct punctuation in my writing


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