Friday, September 5, 2008

Cigarettes should be banned. By Maria (Persuasive writing)

Cigarettes should have never been invented. It is only a little tube, which you stick between your fingers. This little tube contains poison and addiction that you suck into you lungs…

Opinion 1: Cigarettes are unhealthy. If you smoke too much, you can die. It brings nothing but bad things. People just drop them anywhere. It creates litter as well.

Opinion 2: People think it’s cool to smoke. I think it’s cool not to smoke. Whenever I walk past a “cool” person who is smoking, I always have to hold my breath. It would be much easier if there were no cigarettes.

Opinion 3: People think it helps to wind down a window of a car, when they smoke. If they have kids in the back, it certainly does NOT help. The wind just pushes the smoke back into a car for people to breathe and get black lungs.


Conclusion: All cigarettes do is they kill people and brings pollution to the Earth. That is why I think cigarettes should be banned.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great job, Maria. I can see your personol way of writing.


Next Learning Step: Why don't you make a poster about how cigarettes are bad?

-Neil

Anonymous said...

Superb writing maria I toootally agree with you cigarettes should be desroyed

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