Friday, September 5, 2008

The Iron Hamster. By Luke (Creative writing)

The iron hamster was crawling slowly through the howling grass on the way to his path. He reached the brink of a cliff. He watched the sea move very slowly. The iron hamster was taller than a house, his eyes like the glowing stars shinning in the night sky. The iron hamster had walked far from his creator. The iron hamster was not at the brink of the any more, he was wondering of around the cliff as well as watching the sea moving slowly but getting faster as the howling wind was blowing. The iron hamster was slowly walking through the howling grass from the raging wind.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Luke
Mr B has given me the blog link for room 11 and I am very impressed! Your creative writing is extremely descriptive and instantly captured my attention. Keep using that wonderful imagination of yours.

Well done.

Mrs Hammelburg

Anonymous said...

I like the way you used a good vocabulary

James

Anonymous said...

Wow luke i really liked the way that you started you really hooked me in well done! :0)


your friend Alex

Anonymous said...

Great story Luke it hooked me in the whole time and you also put some good discribeing words in the story.

Hunter