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Welcome to our Blog
We will be learning this term about how to use a Blog.
This will be a place where you can share your writing with others.
This will be a place where you can share your writing with others.
Where are people reading this?
How to find your writing
If you are looking for a specific person's writing, type their name into the small white box at the top left hand side. Press enter, and it will list all that person's entries.
Alternatively check out the list of our Top Bloggers!
Alternatively check out the list of our Top Bloggers!
Our most regular writers
Success Criteria for Newspaper Reports
My introduction paragraph includes all the essential points,
explaining who, what, when, where.
The most important ideas at the start and the least important are at the end.
Each new idea is in a new paragraph.
I have included direct speech or reported speech.
I have a good headline to hook the audience.
I have written in the past tense.
I have checked my puctuation adn spelling
explaining who, what, when, where.
The most important ideas at the start and the least important are at the end.
Each new idea is in a new paragraph.
I have included direct speech or reported speech.
I have a good headline to hook the audience.
I have written in the past tense.
I have checked my puctuation adn spelling
Success Criteria for Personal Recounts
I can write a suitable title that will engage readers.
I can hook my audience by starting at the moment.
I can sequence ideas and organise them into paragraphs.
I can use a variety of language features to enhance my witing and engage my audience.
I can use a thesaurus to add more interesting vocabulary.
I can use a dictionary to correct mis-spelt words.
I can use correct punctuation in my writing
I can hook my audience by starting at the moment.
I can sequence ideas and organise them into paragraphs.
I can use a variety of language features to enhance my witing and engage my audience.
I can use a thesaurus to add more interesting vocabulary.
I can use a dictionary to correct mis-spelt words.
I can use correct punctuation in my writing
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- The troll upset! By Luke (Newspaper Report)
- Spash! Crash! Boom! By Maria and Skyler (Creative ...
- Man's Best Friend. By Elliott and Bethany (Creativ...
- Human Machines by Neil and Connor (Creative writing)
- Absolutely Amazing Art Attack Auction. By Neil (Ne...
- Olympics By Sammy (Newspaper Report)
- Alex boosts to fourth By Alex (Newspaper Report)
- Amazing Olympics Day by Alex (Newspaper Report)
- Rbs Olympics By Devon (Newspaper Report)
- Cross Country By Sammy (Newspaper Report)
- Red Beach Schools Olympics day
- Fatal fall causes bad results. By Alesha (Newspape...
- Great White Gets Good Dinner. By Alex (Newspaper R...
- Rescue man eaten alive. By James (Newspaper Report)
- American trooper jailed from shark attack. By Neil...
- Two men, one shark, one survivor. By Maria (Newspa...
- Scary Stuff happens in Sheboygan! By Yasmin (Newsp...
- Shark Attack
- Aiden races to Glory. By Jessica (Newspaper Report)
- Hello, all overseas visitors!
- The Iron Hamster. By Luke (Creative writing)
- Red Beach School takes the chance. By Aimee (Newsp...
- The Iron Man. By Aimee (Creative Writing)
- How do our eyes work? By Aimee (Explanation)
- Cigarettes should be banned. By Maria (Persuasive ...
- Toxic bead school scare. By Skyler (Newspaper report)
- Drysdale leads his Illness to Third. By Aimee (New...
- Red Beach School Olympics ‘wow’ Crowd. By Neil (Ne...
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1 comment:
Hi there Room 11,
We are not 'Overseas Writers', we are 'Upstairs Writers at Red Beach School'. We think your Blog is great and full of words!!! Can we have some more pictures to look at because sometimes we can't read all those words by ourselves. Could we see some pictures of your Art work please??????
Love from
Room 14
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