Friday, August 15, 2008

Why I Think Homework Should Be Banned!!! by Yasmin (Persuasive Writing)

Most children get was too much homework. Hears four reasons why I think homework should be band.

Firstly, I think homework should be band because kids need to exercise not sit down after school doing homework.

Secondly, kids are doing school work all day, and then have to go home and do more work . . . . . HOMEWORK!!!!!

Thirdly, some kids are really busy in the week, and when its Thursday night and kids have not done there homework, mums and kids get really really stressed.

Most kids dislike it.

That’s my four reasons why I think horrible, hard and silly homework should be banned.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great persuasive writing Yasmin!

You reached the success criteria by: Using paragraphs

Anonymous said...

Nice subject and really persuasive

Connor RM9