We should have a school pool by Neil (Persuasive Writing)

Kids have fun in pools. I believe that Red Beach School should have a pool.

Firstly, It’s well known that kids are quite unhealthy. Swimming around for 30 minutes is actually quite a lot of fitness.

Secondly, adults save money. Having to pay $3. 50 to go on a bus to the pool is a lot. Those bus drivers must be desperate. $3.50! Rip off.

Thirdly, and most important, kids have fun. Playing about in wobbly water with noodles and rings is a heap of fun.

In conclusion I believe R.B.S. should have a pool.