Friday, August 15, 2008

Awesome writing this week Rm 11!

It's great to see some accurate newspaper reports about our experience on Tuesday. We'll talk about success criteria on Monday and our next learning steps.

Congratulations to Alex and Neil who have been prolific writers this week. They've been producing newspaper reports, persuasive writing as well as personal recounts.
Also to Alesha who has been copying and pasting the Success Criteria for personal recounts when she's been commenting on other people's work. This means she's really making valuable comments. If you haven't had a go at this, give it a go!

Finally, well done to Aimee, whose mum became the first parent to comment on our blog.

Looking forward to more tremendous writing next week. The Olympics make a great theme for your newspaper reports.

If you haven't got any of your work here yet, then maybe next week it's time to take a risk!

Mr B

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