On Tuesday 12th August 2008, a set of beads from a Lei sent one boy and two girls to hospital with red, swollen eyes to Middle More hospital. When there the three children went through a decontamination shower and took pain relievers, and are now in a stable condition
Emergency services were sent to the school, the Hazard man made his search and found the source on a set of beads from a Lei.
The three children are going to be discharged from hospital on the 13th of august, 2008.
Hi Emily!!!!
16 years ago
2 comments:
Great work Connor! You have reached the success criteria by using paragraphs.
Maria
I can hook my audience by starting at the moment.
you did good at that
I can sequence ideas and organise them into paragraphs.
that is good
I can use a dictionary to correct mis-spelt words.
there is no spelling mistakes so good
well done conner but one thing the kids also got rashes so next time try to work on getting all the info in, other wise awsome job.
Your Friend Alex :0)
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