Friday, August 15, 2008

Sick Kids by Harry (Newspaper report)

At Jean Batten primary school in mangere two boys and one girl got affected by toxic beads.

The kid soon after got sent to middle more hospital .the three kid had swollen eyes and bad rashes round about 11am.

Later the fire brigade arrived inspecting the area mean while the ambulance came and they gave the three kids got given some pain relief and a shower.

Later that after noon the there kids went home and they were all better that after noon.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great work Harry! You have reached the success criteria by using paragraphs.

Maria

Anonymous said...

great work harry I think your work is really great but maybe you could add a bit more to your newspaper report.

Jamez